User blog comment:Nibby the Bird/FrostClan and EmberClan fic Chapter 8/@comment-34316394-20180407110847

When Fawnstep, one of the best hunters with the most stamina was tired,

It should be:

When Fawnstep, one of the best hunters with the most stamina, was tired,

AND GREAT CHAPTER!!!!! Although you might consider not making it all bold, it's a bit hard to read