Thread:Drawkill Dragon/@comment-35982639-20190308090712/@comment-36174913-20190413002021

I have some edits. The stuff in bold is changes I came up with.

Ravenstar looked down at the kit. "May I suggest a name for her?" Redfrost and Cedarfur's eyes widened and an excited look spread across their faces. "Sure," Redfrost mewed, smiling. Ravenstar looked down at the black kit who stared back at her with an odd gleam in her eyes.

"....Silentkit." Redfrost looked a bit surprised. "That a bit of an... odd name for a kit..." Ravenstar gave her a surprisingly serious look.

"I think it would fit her." "Okay..." Redfrost looked down at the newly named Silentkit. "Silentkit it is, then." Cedarfur smiled a bit. Silentkit’s ears perked, and she smiled softly up at Ravenstar.

"I like it.." He turned his gaze to face the gray kit. "How about Smokekit?" Redfrost nodded. "And this one will be Firekit." She curled her tail around the two kits while Cedarfur lay next to her. The two mates pressed their noses together.

"May I...?" Silentkit waited patiently. "Sure!" Firekit squeaked. Ashdust sat next to the group of kits. "So, anyways..." Silent continued. "Wait," mewed Smokekit. "Firekit and... that cat just got here!" Silentkit gave Firekit and Ashdust a warm smile.

"Stay away from my kits you fox-heart." She hugged Firekit, Smokekit and Silentkit closer with her tail and murmured reassuringly to them. Ashdust sighed and padded towards the fresh-kill pile, begrudgingly grabbing a toad from the pile. She bit into it, and felt relaxed at the feeling of food for the morning, but she still felt like something was off... how would Silentkit know that story? Maybe Redfrost or Cedarfur told her? How would they know?

Ashdust glanced back, and made eye contact with Silentkit. The kit’s violet eyes softened slightly, and she dipped her head. A look of understanding and sympathy. Even so, Ashdust was unnerved.

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<p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.38;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:0pt;text-indent: 36pt;"><span style="font-size:11pt;font-family:Arial;color:#000000;background-color:transparent;font-weight:400;font-style:normal;font-variant:normal;text-decoration:none;vertical-align:baseline;white-space:pre;white-space:pre-wrap;">Maybe Silentkit just caught some cats gossiping. Maybe she heard it wrong, and multiple cats didn't die in the young kit's story. Tomorrow was the gathering, anyways. Of course, Ashdust wasn't going. Oh, she wanted to, especially now. Ashdust was sure that would answer some questions. But, you know, crime and punishment and whatever it's called. She sighed and looked up at the sky. "Hopefully things get better soon," she murmured.