User blog comment:Yewberry/Let's Talk About Dovewing/@comment-34764491-20190517215313

I feel like the problem with Dovewing is that she has no real role in the story. She’s the third cat, but it’s never really used in a way that makes sense. And I think it’s good that she’s a flawed character, and somewhat annoying, but there’s no real growth or development so she just kinda stays annoying :/ I think having Ivypool as the mc (not necessarily third cat, just main character) would be better.