Thread:Drawkill Dragon/@comment-35982639-20190308090712/@comment-35982639-20190317134651

sure

and she was announcing the trip to the gathering

specklepoppy's going but ashdust isn't (of course), redfrost, the kits, icewhisper and briarstorm are staying behind and ashdust sneaks out past them to the gathering, specklepoppy notices but doesn't tell anyone thus sparking the bootiful duo and Northstar announces that Hemlockwhisper killed Milkstar, the leader and Icesong, the medicine cat and Mousesong, the apprentice medicine cat killed her

then the gathering chants mousesong's name while ashdust is like "holy f-"

Then Lightningfern  shouts "ROGUE" and Ashdust realizes she's been seen so she takes off running with Lightningfern chasing her, she runs straight into ShadowClan camp RIGHT before Ravenstar comes back so now she's in troubke-

actually i think we should change roles doing the storyboards is more fun

come to think of it coudl you look over the last chapters and maybe find a way to take some suspicion off of Silentkit, and maybe instead have Redfrost and Cedarfur begin to think Silentkit is cursed

Maybe they leave the clan in a later book after Silentkit becomes apprenticed and startss killing people off

actually no redfrost leaves the clan with firepaw and smokepaw, after silentpaw bumps off cedarfur