Thread:Drawkill Dragon/@comment-35982639-20181107042742/@comment-35982639-20190603054020

Okay so I came up with some ideas too!

1. Ashdust Gets Yeeted Out Of ShadowClan

So at the end of the first book Silentpaw kills Dovebreeze with her own claws. Ashdust follows them and sees Silentpaw standing over Dovebreeze. Ashdust leaps at her and pins her down, and realizes Silentpaw is "crying."

Realizing what she's done, Ashdust is about to get off but then a patrol of Twistedpaw (Dovebreeze's son), and some other cats find them and think Ashdust killed Dovebreeze and is about to kill Silentpaw. So they go home, Twistedpaw becomes Twistedbreeze (after his mother) and Ashdust gets yeeted out of the clan.

2. Cedarfur (sort of an alternate version of your idea, we'll see which one is better)

So Silentpaw kills Cedarfur in the second book. At one point offscreen she attacks Lightningfern and stuffs some of Lightningfern's fur in Cedarfur's claws to frame her since Lightningfern is a Silver Mist descendant. Lightningfern gets exiled and Honeycloud (her sister) and Icewhisper (her boyfriend) go with her. Soon after, Redfrost decides to leave the clan with Smokepaw and Firepaw, but Smokepaw decides to stay. Redfrost, Firepaw, Lightningfern, Honeycloud, Icewhisper and Ashdust EVENTUALLY become a group going against the Silent Shade Cult.

3. Silent Shade's StarClan Helper

I was thinking Silent Shade would have a StarClan helper who would send cats dreams like "Silent Shade was wronged, the wrongs must be righted, yada yada yada" since, like, who would believe a Dark Forest cat, and she does a lot of important things. For example:

4. Sootfrost Reveals The Secret

So the StarClan helper sends Sootfrost a HORRIBLE GRUESOME BLOODY DREAM about Emberpaw and Alderpaw being really gruesomely murdered and they're like "tell the truth or this will happen to them" so Sootfrost leaps up onto the Shaderock the following morning and screams the secret to the whole clan. He then leaps down, and runs away from ShadowClan to flee consequences, and also joins Ashdust's group.

5. My Idea For Silent's Cult

So the StarClan Helper tells Silent's descendants the story of how Silent Shade was wronged and awful stuff happened and Silver Mist is just chilling in StarClan and sentencing other innocent cats to the Dark Forest. Every half moon they go and the StarClan Helper sends a Silver Mist descendant to Fourtrees and they all dogpile them and murder them. Also I think she'd let Smoketail join because he's a medicine cat and can't have kits anyway, he gets a crush on someone at some point and Silent Shade figures it out and kills them. Idk came up with that last bit like a few seconds ago as of the time I'm writing this

6. Skyfeather

I was thinking Skyfeather could be a Silver Mist descendant mistaken for a Silent Shade descendant and Silentshade gets like a crush on her but then realizes the truth, so the next meeting she and the other SilentShaders kill Skyfeather and Silentshade like cries after everyone leaves and Smoketail watches.. it's really dramatic and sad

7. The End

I think the end of the series is like, Silent decides to just launch an attack on all four clans and murder all the Silver Mist Descendants, but Smoketail finally decides to go behind her back and tell Ravenstar, and so we switch to Specklepoppy's PoV and she goes on a patrol to warn RiverClan and then they meet Silent's Battle Patrol lead by her herself, and they fight, Smoke and Fire show up and Silent and Fire have this huge epic duel, and then Silent almost kills Fireberry, and then she's like "my cult will kill the other silver mist ppl my work here is done" and she goes to leap off into the gorge because she's a silver mist descendant herself but then Ravenstar appears out of nowhERE and saves her, and then tries to convince her otherwise but Silent's like "heck you i know what i want" and she turns around and Silver Mist's spirit is there, Silentshade attacks her but goes right through her and Silver Mist apologizes, and then all the spirits whose deaths Silent has either directly or indirectly caused appear and there's this eally meaningful moment where silent's mind gets changed, she becomes a good cat, all the spirits forgive her and disappear, silent calls off the attack, tells the cult she was wrong and silent goes back to shadowclan with smoke and fire, and leaves the cult in confusion, unrest and anger setting up for the perfect sequel

BOOM

whaddya think