User blog comment:IFlow~/SavannaClan/@comment-34316394-20180512102938

This is a really good idea!!

I have a suggestion: in the allegiances, when you say how old they are, ex. Oryxface is 38 moons old, because you have that at the end and "Okapikit" right before it, it sounds like Okapikit is 38 moons old, so maybe change that?