Ashdust (QuailWhiskerTheTrash)

Personality
Ashdust is a somewhat critical elder. She's cranky, aggressive, and greedy. But she's not evil, even when some apprentices with the unfortunate duty of ridding her of ticks may think so. Ashdust is very sarcastic, and has a surprisingly good sense of humor. She makes big decisions quickly, and often makes the right choice. Yet when she doesn't, she falls flat on her face and ruins pretty much everything. She likes bossing others around, but hates the idea of responsibility.

Backstory
Kind of just a storyboard, here are just a few key moments that impacted her. It might have some flaws, because it's just a starting idea. Feel free to add some advice in the comments!
 * Born during a greencough epidemic
 * Nearly died
 * Brother was killed
 * Was apprenticed 2 moons early due to lack of apprentices after epidemic
 * Was trained well
 * Becomes a warrior at about nine moons
 * After a while receives Ravenpaw as an apprentice
 * Is angry that Ravenpaw isn't a good hunter and is more interested in decorating and other visually appealing things
 * Advises Ravenpaw be forbidden to leave camp
 * Message passes as "Ravenpaw be forbidden from leaving camp WITHOUT ASHDUST"
 * Became upset
 * Ravenpaw becomes Ravenflower
 * After while, Ravenflower becomes deputy
 * Ashdust gets worried for ShadowClan's safety
 * Snakestar is killed in a battle
 * Ravenflower becomes leader and makes Ashdust deputy
 * Other cats start to rebel
 * Ashdust secretly joins in
 * Sets a trap that takes Ravenstar's first life
 * Rebelling cats including Ashdust try to drive Ravenstar out
 * Ravenstar demotes Ashdust
 * Thorntail becomes deputy
 * Ashdust retires after another long while of warrior duties

Comic (W.I.P.)
working on it ;v;

Trivia

 * Ashdust is part Somali.
 * Ashdust didn't hate Ravenpaw, and she still saw her as an okay warrior.