Thread:Nibby the Bird/@comment-32210639-20180401153722/@comment-34764491-20180430230957

Good! I'm writing the climax of the battle rn. I'm just gonna keep offering you previews becasue I want your advice on it

'''Dropstar stood up, a small cut burning from the side of her cheek. Another she-cat, whose name she remembered as Emberfall, was swirling her long, elegant tail in the air as she jumped around Wolfstreak and Fawnstep. Dropstar watched her with a wary eye as she caught her breath, then suddenly Emberfall darted forward and raked her claws along Fawnstep’s front legs. The tan colored FrostClanner hurtled back, straight into Wolfstreak, who spun around, dazed. Using her moment, a mink bengal apprentice Dropstar had spotted before darted under the grey and white tom’s belly and hooked her claws into the soft pale fur. Wolfstreak began to fall upon the much lighter she cat, but suddenly his attacker rose to her full height and threw him off. Dizzy, the young warrior shook his head, before the bengal she-cat and another long legged spotted apprentice cornered him against a wall. '''

'''Dropstar prepared to reach the tom and pull the two young she-cats away from him, but suddenly an electric pain shot through her as one of the apprentice toms crashed forward, sinking his sharp canines into her white tail. '''