Thread:CrazyNeonWolfx/@comment-34764491-20180417112921/@comment-34764491-20180429134428

Also, would you like another preview? I'm not the best at battle scenes and want to know your opinion. This is completely unedited.

'''Suddenly, fresh blood spattered across the grey floor. Tawnyjade was half on top of Goldenshine, twisting his faintly striped neck as he sunk his teeth into the FrostClanner’s tufted ears. Goldenshine yowled, his square-shaped muzzle curling up to reveal gleaming teeth. Dropstar felt anger surge through her as she pounded towards the two. She charged forward and then leaped, tackling the EmberClan tom off of the golden warrior onto the ground. Dust stirred around them as she pinned him down, her back paws digging into his hind legs. Tawnyjade managed to bite the edge of her cheek, before Woodfleck jumped in and hauled him away by the scruff of his angular neck. '''