Talk:Phoenixfire's Rise/@comment-37529955-20190720170728/@comment-33950110-20190808003849

Hmm. Start story with Phoenix trying to calm his sister down because the humans are all agitated. Then there’s a huge CRASH because a worker dropped something, and Wren gets spooked and runs. Phoenix follows her, yowling at her to come back, but their parents stay. They streak through a room, and a worker gets scared and causes his forklift to crash into the pipes. Then pretty soon, after Wren stops on a tall hill with a clear view of the factory, there’s the huge explosion. That vaporizes their parents. They’re shocked but they know they can’t go back. So they travel and somehow find themselves on FeatherClan territory. Enter a badger/fox attacking them, and suddenly a convenient patrol (not including Sharptalon :c) arrives to save their butts. One of them asks if they want to join FeatherClan, the two exchange looks but agree.

Whew, that was long.