Thread:Drawkill Dragon/@comment-35982639-20181107042742/@comment-35982639-20181122005943

Thanks! Anything you want me to change?

Also, maybe we could split the PoV between Ashdust and one of your OCs.

Also also, added:

-

Part of her already knew what she was about to say, a small part, and yet she was still surprised when Silent Shade opened her mouth to say:

“I’m your ancestor, Ravenstar.”

Ravenstar made a small gasp. “Family’s always there for eachother, you know. And, if you help me, I can make it worth it.”

Ravenstar flicked her ear. “What could you do?” Silent Shade smiled. “I can give you anything… What shall it be?”

Ravenstar blinked, and looked at her paws in thought. Then looked up. “Could you how my clan to have more faith in me and my leadership?” Silent Shade gave a kind smile. “That will be simple. Are we ready?” Ravenstar nodded. “Thank you.”

Silent Shade gave a smirk. “I should be thanking you, my descendant.” Then Silent Shade shot at Ravenstar like lightning.

Ravenstar awoke with a gasp. Her den was dark, yes she knew by the gleam coming in through the entrance it was sunrise. She stood up and stretched, her claws extending and curling into the soft, green moss. Ravenstar padded outside of the Leader’s Den and watched the bright yellow orb of light rise through the crimson sky. Ravenstar smiled. She gave one of her lives to help a cat in need; a cat who was her ancestor. Her family. A StarClan cat. Now Silent Shade would get a second chance to live the glorious life she and all other cats deserve.

What could go wrong?

--END OF PROLOGUE :D--