User blog comment:Nibby the Bird/Chapter 9 EmberClan and FrostClan Collab Fic/@comment-34316394-20180412210938

Typos/grammar mistakes (i think)

Prey Rook

Winpaw

Through the nose she was met with shaking heads and apologies.

Dropstar called put his name

mide climb or bury under

'When there, Needletoe immediately settled her on a seperate nest. He and Creamwing were one of the few cats awake still. Dropstar,'

Creamwing isn't capitalized

Clan isn't capitalized

Note: Sorry to bother you! I really like it! But it's so sad!