Thread:DewSpectrum11/@comment-31335734-20181101234900/@comment-31448721-20181102165940

Good! The next step is to make note of good phrases and descriptions you hear. Also, when writing descriptions, if you think a desc you write is too short, find points you can expand on:

His fur was ginger.

His long, silky fur was ginger.

His long, silky fur was a reddish shade of ginger.

See how it gets better each time?