Thread:Drawkill Dragon/@comment-35982639-20181107042742/@comment-36174913-20190730215018

Tbh I don't know all the characters. Could we make a list of all the ShadowClan cats at the start of this story? Also, here's my new pacing idea!

The prologue and maybe the first chapter stay the same, but we move the birth of the kits to maybe... Chapter 4?

Chapter 2 establishes Specklepoppy, and shows her sneaking off to meet Copperbird? (I invoke the show-don't-tell advice.)

Chapter 3 gives us how oddly Ravenstar is acting. Basically pampers Redfrost and Specklepoppy? Like, more than usual. Perhaps the apprentices have been instructed to check on them once an hour or something?

Then Chapter 4 shows the start of the Speckle-Ash duo? Ash feels down and Speckle comes over to check on her? Then Redfrost buts in between them, hissing at Ash to keep away from the clan's future or something like that? And the end of the Chapter is her going into labor?