Thread:DewSpectrum11/@comment-26236500-20180903124903

could i possibly make the deputy of shadowclan? his name would be Thorntail; i dont know how much info you need so i will be brief for now

Appearance: a tall, white tom with splotches of brown tabby patterns along his spine and tail. Thorntail also has amber eyes, a fluffy tail, and a scar curling across his lower back

Personality: Thorntail is quite patient with other cats and is seen as very wise, even though he is hard on himself when he makes a mistake. he has high respect for ravenstar and the warriors among his clan, and he will defend them should the time come. He is very wary of the other clans and will not hesitate to drive out an intruder with his teeth and claws. He has no tolerance for rogues.

Abilities: Thorntail is an adept ambush fighter. He is not the best at hunting (he has shaky paws), but he is very skilled at stalking among the swamp and using mud to mask his scent when the time for a battle comes. He is honorable in combat unless the offenders have done something atrocious (like steal or kill a kit, for example), then he will be no mercy. Along with his size and senority as a warrior, he is an few are equal to him in the battle zone.

History: Thorntail has been a ShadowClan cat all his life, and he was named for some thorns getting stuck in his long tail when he was just a kit, which is ironic, considering his name is now thorntail. He has always shown great intelligence and awareness, even in his young age, and as an apprentice, he was always willing to do the dirty work some of his fellow apprentices despised. He was never good at hunting, as his paws were unbalnced and sometimes shaky. Howver, his mentor let it slide when he showed excellence in combat. 