Talk:Flood of Blood/@comment-35982639-20180919074422/@comment-35982639-20180919194936

Something like this.

Scorchfern stood in the center of the camp, assinging patrols. "...lead the dawn patrol. Larktalon, Owlhollow, care to join me?" Larktalon nodded silently, as did Owlhollow. They stood beside her as she assigned the rest of the patrols and then they all headed out of camp.

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A shriek sounded from the camp entrance as Owlhollow and Larktalon tumbled in. Larktalon had a big lump of fur in his jaws.. with orange, firey dapples. Loonpaw recognized the pelt with a jolt. ''Oh, StarClan no.. ''Larktalon dropped his limp cargo and breathed heavily for a moment, his eyes wide with shock. "S-S-" "What's going on?" Petalstar wove her way to the mumbling, confused crowd surronding them. "S-Scorchfern's dead..!!" Larktalon gasped. Owlhollow panted next to him before sitting down quietly, grief showing through his eyes. Petalstar gasped, then she made her way up to the corpse. Scorchfern's dark blue eyes were glazed over, with fury showing throguh them with a hint of fear. "How did this happen?" Petalstar demanded. "Sh-Sh-She fell into the r-r-river and hit her head on a.. a-a rock, and I tried to save her and she must have th-thought I was attacking.." He gasped for air a couple times before continuing, "she tried to fight back, but th-then when I finally managed to reach h-her she'd.. she'd already..." Larktalon took a few deep breaths. Petalstar sighed. "You tried, Larktalon. That's respectable.."

She turned to Owlhollow. "And where were you when this was happening?" "I was hunting near sunningrocks, Petalstar. I had no knowledge of what was going on." Petalstar nodded. "We shall sit vigil for Scorchfern tonight. But first.. I must appoint a new deputy." Petalstar leaped onto the Wetrock, not yowling the meeting call as her clanmates were already assembled. "As you all may know, we have lost a brave warrior tonight. So, as tradition states, I shall name the new deputy immediately. But first, let us give thanks to StarClan for the life of Scorchfern. Tonight she sits with her fellow warriors among the stars. I say these words before the body of Scorchfern, so her spirit may hear and approve of my choice." She scanned the gathered cats. "Whiteflood will be the new deputy of RiverClan." Whiteflood's eyes went bright with pride as the cats around him started to chant. "WHITEFLOOD! WHITEFLOOD! WHITEFLOOD!" Loonpaw joined in with the chanting. Once it was all over, the clan sat vigil for Scorchfern. Until the break of dawn, when the cats close to her would be able to rest off their shock for a few days.