Thread:Drawkill Dragon/@comment-35982639-20181107042742/@comment-35982639-20190108074355

Also a few more things

The plot is feeling kind of rushed, maybe you can go over it and fix some things

OOOF I had another idea but I forgot it

Maybe Silentshade just killed a whole bunch of cats with her group and is about to take her own life and blame it on the ShadowClan rebellion cats when Ravenstar comes in and convinces her to change?

Also, which of your OCs would you think could join Silent's group?